Until...

Until...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

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art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again


© 2014 MsJewel



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This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie



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This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie
Oh, Julie, this form is stunning and the sentiment so warm and romantic. Such a gorgeous offering. I don't often do this....you scored a 100 with this one! Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one - it is one of my favorites! Hugs, Julie
This is a lovely poem. It shows a practiced hand at work. With elegant line structure, clean crisp words, beautiful delicate words and perfect rhyme and rhythm it stands out. I love the way the imagery swirls in and wraps around other images that grace the poem.

As a Country and Western son this one would shine under the steel guitars and swish rapid drumming. Yet the message lends itself to exquisite meaning.

I love the gentle message and the fluid stylish writing. There are no unnecessary words hanging around doing nothing.

Love it. Will read more of your work as I go along. I'm new to this site and just pottering my way around. Thank you for sharing. Still have to find my way around.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Welcome to WC Marshall. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a lovely comment on my poem.. read more
Hi Julie,
Another beautiful poem. A tribute to an everlasting love.
I loved this one.
Clive

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)Julie
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, filled with hope. I just didn't read your poem but I could feel every word of it. Its very deep and you expressed the feelings through weather, brilliant work

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thank you :) Julie
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Sigh, the hopeless romantic in me wants to dwell here in these beautiful words forever. So lovely, .." kiss the teardrops from the clouds" what a gorgeous image. You paint the pain of parting with such a loving heart, this is truly an amazing write. Well done beautiful poet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
You have used the weather and emotions in a sweet embrace. I could fall in love with this poem and never meet the person who penned it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie
god, your poetry is so beautiful, so lyrical..

what else can i see...it's a breath of fresh air...a rainbow after a storm.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie
yes, until..until we meet again..love those first lines..so beautiful..exquisite Julie..

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie
so very lovely in poetic verse...reads like a love song...soft and lyrical

nicely donE!!l

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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