This Night

This Night

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a sensual little scribble ~

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                This night…

 

Let there only be moonlight

and your breath upon my skin

painting my cheeks a fevered blush

my lips softening the crush of yours

 

Eyes veiled with wishes,

souls wrapped in beams of light

exposing every secret

whispered sweet….passionate sips

between love’s kiss

 

For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden

not the power of my fragility

as weakened in your strength

pressing us closer together

 

I catch my breath…you breathe me in

               

Hearts beating wild,

 like the dance of a windblown flame

 captured

                                                      this night

       

                                                we breathe us

 


© 2015 MsJewel



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I knew I was going to love this from reading the first two lines. So sensual and passionate, but not aggressive or uncouth. I love that you can convey such a sexy scene while still keeping it classy. Perfect poem for someone's bae on Valentine's Day! Amazing job

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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Elisa :) Julie



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That was very beautiful poem ,..

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Nothing is little about this scribble! Delightful, with a punchline at the end "we breathe us" which finishes it off perfectely, like the final note in a symphony of love.

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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
I knew the moment that I read this, that it was one of your finest works of art.
You have a beautiful way of expressing such lovely thoughts
and an incredible sense of sensuality that spills across the page
as your words flow so seamlessly in to poetry.

Thank you for sharing another of your amazing poems with us,
This should go in the front of your book as most enjoyed reading.

Love it,
and the lovely poet I call my best friend,

Huggs, Trace

Posted 2 Years Ago


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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

...and thank you my sweet beast for your on-going job as poetry editor and poets sounding board and .. read more
Trace

2 Years Ago

That means the world to me.

Thank you sweet lady.
There is so much confidence in your style. Your words are like feathers that float in the readers ear. This is very romantic.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review and lovely compliment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
pressing us closer together
I catch my breath…you breathe me in
Hearts beating wild,

Great and heart taking write. Love this with all my hearts.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
your work always blazes with beauty A shinning star among the sky of poets.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

You are too kind Tate. Thank you :) Julie
The night that shall last forever in memory long after time moves forward the years.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

thank you for your lovely comment :) julie
As always, a very romantic and beautiful poem, Julie. Very well done. :) Rudi

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

thank you rudi :) julie
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Wish I had words to describe how I feel about this poem but I will give it one word which happens to be my first name "marvelous"

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MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. thank you :) julie
Benedict Mdluli

2 Years Ago

More than enjoying, great pleja & honour!!!
Romance and passion, the perfect evening :) Beautifully written! :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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