Soft Unrest

Soft Unrest

A Poem by MsJewel


Dark of night in amethyst

dreams, they lie in soft unrest

starlight rises from the sea

moonlight crowned in such beauty…


           

 

From the aching depths below

I feel the lingering glow

of the night,

                                      the sky,

                                                          the sea

the dreams that wait for you, for me

 

So warm in the paling moon

oh would it be far too soon

to wish you near, let you in

feel the curve of silken skin

 

I will don my velvet dress

hold you to my beating breast

loosening my golden hair

glistening on perfumed air

 

With careless head, heaven bound

feet swept gently from the ground

in your arms of tenderness

embraced with love’s sweetest breath

 

Slip into me and be lost

‘til time fades and we exhaust

the light of the moon’s bright crown

in my sea of love to drown….

 

Dark of night, in amethyst

                                                         dreams they lie in soft unrest


© 2017 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
art ~ Ron Discenza
poetry ~ MsJewel

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oh my my! whew! sooooooooooo romantic and hot! i am almost blushing as it seems too private a moment to be peeking in on ..and as always makes me want to be "him" ;) what a splendid dish .. the sway, the moon the waves .. makes me dream
E.
ps smart use of contrast with the "unrest" ..i wasn't expecting resolution :O

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie



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Well-done composition in tones of lilac (including font & artwork choices!) The crafting of this message is flowing & seductive, with good rhythm & rhyme. Excellent imagery from nature to paint the seductive longing with much feeling.

Posted 5 Months Ago


So good. Beautiful and romantic, strong finish too.
A soft unrest, it seems like not such a bad thing I think.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
The intentionality behind the written word conveys such powerful amorous filled with so much lady class. The structure, form, and rhyming scheme in your poem allowed me to practically hear your picturesque voice read aloud in an alluring yet respectful elegant manner, excellent work, should write a novel.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
This is the ultimate high in pure romantic poetry.
More sensual than sexual, it tells of a new love interest and the first time indulging in the undressing of inhibition and the joy of fulfillment.

Beautifully expressed passion and poetry at its best.

Huggs. Trace

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you Trace :) Julie
What a beautiful flow of colors and dreams mingled into this sensual, soft world of warmth. The scent, the moonlight, this world of wonder flowing from the depths of your sea, this is a sacred love.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Wow Wow...... hummmm..
Sweet and Hot... and colorful !!

Nice................... Jazzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much :) Julie
J. J.  Nightingale

6 Months Ago

You are welcome Julie................
Julie, Julie, just when I think I have read a lovely romantic poem from you, I look up and here is another, but even more intense, more lovely, more sensual, more romantic... *sigh* "Dark night of amethyst/ dreams they lie is soft unrest" that ne right there is enough to make anyone want to drown within its moon light... and I love amethyst, a strong healing stone and also my birthstone... and a color that sets a warm, romantic tone for your poem..

redzone...



Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you Curt. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Amethyst is one of my favorite colors as well. I didn'.. read more
redzone

6 Months Ago

Yep that's what the charts say. . also protects you from getting drunk. .lol. way too late for me th.. read more
Your page is a place to drown in the soft unrest even for a moment in time and place. Your longing is crowned with jewels of colored beauty. From the heart, you transcend all the boundaries to the heavenly realms...:)..............

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your generous words Sami :) Julie
Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

You are welcome ...::::)))))
An A+ for this one mon cher.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
You make your reader feel like a voyeur, Julie!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

Thank you Kelly :) Julie

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