Pissed off

Pissed off

A Poem by Justin
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pissed off bc been
taken advantage of
not only in 
personal life
but work life
busting a*s
for nothing
getting treated
horrible
trying to be
the great guy
but getting nowhere
with that
guess being a bad
guy gets ppl
far
instead of being the good
guy
pissed off not
having someone to talk 
too 
someone who wants to hear
things and dont matter 
the time of day
ppl who thought
were friends
arent really
just being friends
to say that they 
have a friend that is
different
not being able to
move forward in life
stuck in a rut
pretty boring
trying to move
forward but not getting
a dam place
pissed off seeing
ppl who dont want to
work living the life
struggling everyday for 
nothing
working for nothing
making small mistakes
that are blown up
pissed off not being
able to sleep
some nights
worrying about stuff
that shouldnt worry about
but do anyways

© 2018 Justin



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I love how manic and off the cuff this is. Very raw and emotional. Much love and my best wishes go to you

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I couldn't relate more! I just quit my job of 8 years because I couldn't take the stress of busting my a*s and getting nowhere!

Great piece! I love how real it is!

Posted 3 Months Ago


It can be really hard when people don't treat us fairly, and when we feel stuck in life. Venting, like you did here, can really help sometimes. I hope you feel better now and can stay in a good mood for a while. I'm not always on this website, but when I am, I'm always open to talk if you want.

Posted 6 Months Ago


this is so relatable , reminds me of myself when someone pisses me off and all these thoughts come into my head. nice piece!

Posted 6 Months Ago


I love how honest this is Justin... it's so real and relatable!! It made me feel better knowing others feel this way sometimes too!! :) And don't give up on work or anything... the people who are taking advantage of you aren't actually doing it because of you... they're doing it because of problems in their own lives! :(

Posted 6 Months Ago


This really shows human emotion in an original type of way. I've never seen anything quite like it. It's definitely not just another poem written about life.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Justin

6 Months Ago

Thanks, the title says it all
Scorpion Flametail

6 Months Ago

I agree, it says it all.
Justin

6 Months Ago

it is a strong emotion being angry
it is an emotional poem and very much human in the display of emotions

Posted 6 Months Ago


Justin

6 Months Ago

thanks :) sometimes that are feelings are
sette

6 Months Ago

i have already reviewed the poem
I feel ya Justin! Its on the money.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Justin

6 Months Ago

thanks :) i am glad u can relate to it :)
Diane

6 Months Ago

Now more then ever
Justin

6 Months Ago

i am glad u are my friend :)
I feel the poem my friend. I worked for a large company for 15 years. I managed a nightshift. Fired me last week. I'm fine. Hard work and untrustworthy people can test us. I hope you feel better. Now I have time to read some poetry and story. Thank you Justin for sharing your powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Justin

6 Months Ago

your welcome, thanks for reading it and that u can relate to it
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

A bear of a world and I understood your words.

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