Loneliness

 

LONELINESS

 

 

I dwell within

Her very core

Emanate

from every

Pore

Dampen any

Fire or spark

Pay homage

to the

Deepest dark

Embrace her

with an

Emptiness

that leaves her

Spent

 with hopelessness

Paralyzed

 and in despair

I make her feel

that no one

Cares

With every breath

I slowly

 Tear

Her fragile heart

Beyond repair

 

 

klm/7-07

 

Reviews

[B.R.]

I thought the poem was well written, I liked how you turned the emotion into a separate entity

[Jade Mayhew]

I liked that a lot. It's cool how the poem wouldn't make too much sense unless you know the title.

Wonderful job. :]]]

[DeadCharlie]

I really liked your poem, it is well written, and you chose descriptive words that fit in well.