Hunger and Thirst

What happens when the lights go down,

And the hunger grows and grows,

Until you lose complete control?

 

What happens when a simple look

Can make your body shake with want?

 

Won’t you come here?

 

The sound of steaming water is startling in the cool night

And he’s strong and urgent,

With hands that strip me down as
I do the same to him.

And I want him.

I want him so badly.

 

But he’s slow to take in everything.

And his eyes reflect what I feel.

And his body shifts at my touch,

But I can’t stop. I have to feel every part of him

While I take his clothes.

 

The water is hot and pours over me,

Energizing the moment so it feels like fire
Is glowing between us.

 And he whispers, ever so lightly, I want you

 

I lose it.

I lose every thought in my mind and

Every memory of anything.

There is only him and the feel of his hands

Running up and down my body.

 

But it’s the fact that he pins my arms above me,

Not taking a single look away from my eyes,

That makes me want him so badly.

 

And he’s touching me lightly, but

Then harder and with urgency.

His hands and his lips, I lose track of

Everywhere he’s been or going.

All I know is he’s there and he’s here

And I want him everywhere even more.

 

His breath is hot and mixed with heavy want.

I want you
He bites his lip,

Then he’s there, kissing me all over

My neck and my chest, leaving in their

Wake a burn that grows so rapidly and deep

That I can only think of him

 

His hands on my hips, he kisses me deeper

And the water pours over both of us, blending with the

Scorch of our touch and craving for one another.

 

I can’t control the noises that escape me

But I know he longs for them so I no longer

Try to keep them inside me.

And suddenly, I can’t control anything anymore.

I’m shaking uncontrollably now and the sounds

Are animalistic as they reach my lips.

But he doesn’t stop and I don’t want him to.

His hands hunger for every part of my body

And I long for him to be in me and over me,

As the feverish water maximizes every touch.

And the pleasure is heard

And here.

And there.

And felt everywhere. 

Reviews

[ThomasHinyard]

Favorite lines:

"But he doesn’t stop and I don’t want him to.
His hands hunger for every part of my body
And I long for him to be in me and over me,
As the feverish water maximizes every touch.
And the pleasure is heard
And here.
And there.
And felt everywhere."

Hot, erotic, sensually pornographic, intimate... Those are the words that I use to describe this, a thorough portrait of urgent pleasure... making love.
:)

[Samantha Lynn]

this is exactly how I feel when I... well.. When I am doing that... lol it preojects everything so well, Love it xD

[MoriartyMesa]

Part of me thinks this would make a great metal song, another part thinks jazz. I like it, keep writing.

[Kaylor Mason]

I think I my heart and soul are badly flashburned by the fires of desire. I'm in need of a cold shower, an iced drink and a confession booth . . . maybe not in that order

[Lion of Judah]

Very nice. Vivid imagery in motion mmmmmm

[InkLust]

Your words project such urgency! I love the sensations of heat, water, and that mind-bending haze that takes over. Amazing write.