Noise

I am just lost.

Is anyone out there?

Because these days I can't even find comfort within myself.

It's too quiet,

This silence within me is different than the others,

This is a harsh silence,

One that makes me exhale loudly, my breath rattling through my body,

Just to make noise.

If I am lost within myself

Will I ever have a home to return to?

Reviews

[Relic]

I've heard it at times. It echoes the words companionship and interaction. We all need it sometimes when life gets dark.

[aj milton]

Well expressed. I might just have found some noise to match your words.....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4NTcFhCBHQ

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Beautiful song, thank you for introducing me to it :)

[Ethan]

This is very pretty. Short and sweet. Nicely done :)

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thank you :)

[T0TS]

WOW! deep to be displaced within your soul...home is where the heart is...it is whatever you want it to be. :)

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thanks, that's why I love your poetry, its so light and beautiful, mine is always very dark XD

[T0TS]

Like anything else, poetry is subjective...people are drawn to whatever they like or write...I write in beauty because the world is dark and hateful place...so I find that beauty in the harshest environment...thank you for liking poems...I don't want it to take away from your beautiful work of arts. :)