Go to pray.

 Come sit by me

can you see the stars are so much brighter here?

come sit by me

and breathe...

breathe in, breathe in, breathe out...

come sit by me

and take my hand before we sink into the sand

you are lovelier than you know.

you are my stars, you are my sand, you are my air

and wherever you go i will be there

always

and wherever you rest, there i will stay

always.

you are where i go to pray,

you are where i go to pray.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Soft tender words of prayer! The way you used your words was so tender and beautiful!

[Ethan Paz]

Very good descriptive poem. You did really well to encourage the reader. Good job.

[MissWordSmith]

ahhhhhhhhh...so soothing and beautiful ! a truly LOVEly piece this

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Bravo Bravo

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Wow Very lovely Poem so Beautiful you about had me in tears Beautiful words.

i love all the lines but i keep reading these Linesbreathe in, breathe in, breathe out...

come sit by me

and take my hand before we sink into the sand


you are lovelier than you know.


then this one i love you are my stars, you are my sand, you are my air

and wherever you go i will be there

always

and wherever you rest, there i will stay

always.

you are where i go to pray,

you are where i go to pray.

[Antonio Valentino]

Kiri, this was beautiful.

Wonderful writing!
Antonio

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. The movement and words made this a positive and hopeful poem. A offer to pray with another is a kind gift. A excellent poem. Thank you.

Coyote

[Jeff Bresee]

Foo on the review below...I really like this. Perhaps they have nowhere to go to pray.

Keep up the good work.

[Fallen Angel]

The grammar could use some work, for sure, bur overall I guess it works.