It's Just not Fair

It's Just not Fair

A Poem by *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*
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This is one of the 26 songs I made when I was younger... Uh... Unfortunately, it's one of the very few that actually sound good right now.... You know... in this era.... hehe... weird. well, I actually had to alter this so that it didn't sound childish.

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Intro.

It's just not fair that I cannot be with you.
It's so unfair that I wish it wasn't true.

I can't believe this
You're no longer mine.
This is too much for me
Why did you say things would be fine?

(Chorus)
Well...
I cannot believe that me and you
Will never be together. And it's true
You don't hate me and I don't hate you
But why do they have to tear us in two?

It's just not fair that we will never be
But why did things just turn into one big dream?

I have some thoughts,
Dreams and ideas
But you're too stubborn
To even stop--

Look at me....
I cannot believe that me and you
Will never be together. And it's true
You don't hate me and I don't hate you
But why do they have to tear us in two?

... I just do....
Wish it was up to me and you.

... I just do....
Won't they listen? I have a say in this too!

(Chorus)

... I just do....
Will we have a say in this too?

... I just do....
Would our kids be like this too?

© 2008 *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*


Author's Note

*^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*
Yay!!! One of the many I was able to find in Google Cache!! XD

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I wish you could record your songs? Have you ever tried? Do you play an instrument? Are you tech savvy? I did my first album self-taught, self-produced from home. Let me know if you ever have any questions! I understand the feelings in this song! -:3 )~~~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice very nice I would love to hear this over a smooth beat good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008
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*^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*
*^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*

that one city with the stuff, CA



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I love to write fantasy. My name is Dianne and I live in California. I am what my name says: I love The Legend of Zelda! Link is my sexy love, and Epona is my horsy love! Speaking of which, I love hor.. more..

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