In Between the Two

In Between the Two

A Poem by *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*

Intro.

 

I didn't ask for you

I didn't know you two

I didn't say, "I love you."

I never wanted to

 

But when I look into your eyes

Your heart seems full of lies

Oh why don't you just tell me

I'm not the one you really like

 

(Chorus)

Well I'm crying

For

Your

Love

Oh please just tell me

Tell me

I wanna know

 

I see him walking down the street

I see you walking by my side

Can't God just tell me what to do
Can't he tell me who to love?
 

You seem to want to get away

I ask, you say, "There's nothing wrong"

But your eyes, they say, "Set me free"

Why don't you just make up your mind?

 

(Chorus)

Well I'm crying

For

Your

Love

Oh boy why don't you just tell me

Tell me

I wanna know

 

Tragedy wakes me up

My heart lets me down

Your voice pulls away

From my ear

 

Just promise me

That you'll always be

Right by my side

(Why, why, oh why)

 

Look at me

Tell me please

Say you love me

(because your silence tells me you don't care)

 

(Chorus)

(Say you're there, even when you're not)

Look at me

Answer me

Tell me

(Come on please and tell me you love me)

(Chorus until song fades)

© 2008 *^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*


Author's Note

*^*my*beautiful*zelda*love*^*
Unfortunately, this was one of my important songs that got deleted and I couldn't recover; I knew most of it by heart, but there are some parts in the second verse and near the ending I had to completely rewrite because I forgot those parts. Thank goodness one of the parts I would've missed in the second verse just happened to be in Little Mouse's review :D Thank you!!

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I did not find this to be..."Sappy"...in any way. I enjoyed reading this write Diane, and look forward to reading more of your' work...Hugz...Jillian

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely!

Let them both go until you find you! Be strong enough to go alone, don't settle!

Your verses:

Can't God just tell me what to do
Can't he tell me who to love?

Don't push love, yes wait for God, he will tell you, trust that small little voice, whatever you do don't get physical or you will become consumed and confused... and once this confusion takes over the smart small little voice gets muddled and you won't be able to hear.

Trust your heart and take your time, trust that you are not alone. It is not until we are not so desperate for another that we are able to make a good choice. -:3 )~~~

Great song My Beautiful Zelda Love!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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that one city with the stuff, CA



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I love to write fantasy. My name is Dianne and I live in California. I am what my name says: I love The Legend of Zelda! Link is my sexy love, and Epona is my horsy love! Speaking of which, I love hor.. more..

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