Would You?

So tell me mother, would you even care?

If I dive right off the cliff

And smash my head

Upon the rocks

Would you cry mommy?

 

If I slit my own wrists

And slowly died

In pool of blood

Would you miss me mommy?

 

If I vanished with a trace

And never ever

Came back home

Would you search for me mommy?

 

If I went crazy

And ended up in

A padded room

Would you hold my hand mommy?

 

If I died of a broken heart

Slowly suffering until

I dwindled away

Would you blame yourself mommy?

 

I hope and pray the answer

Will be forever yes

But sadly I feel

Right now it’s no

Reviews

[smilempsn]

That was a heartbreaking poem.....
Well mothers, will and always care for their children.....No matter where they are...
They always want their children to be Happy... Make Progress in life....

This will surely break her heart too... :(

[marie]

right now its a no- favorite line hands down no questions asked no ifs ands or buts reason why? its true for me and many others

[Ethale Captor]

This is my mind written in a poem. All of my thoughts since I was able to think them. This is an excellent poem.

[Tasha]

this is so sad and heartbreaking. you've written it beautifully.

[Lourisa]

This is heartbreaking! Having worked with children who have been rejected, abandoned and abused by their own parents, this poem brings back so many memories.
A Beautiful poem.

[Maggie]

It's a yes...when she wakes up.