That is so deep. It is a mother with a secret I think. I see the picture of her looking at her distorted reflection off of the bridge into the water. I understand that she cannot talk about something but I do not know why. Is it a secret or is it just too horrible to speak of out loud? The questions that this mysterious poem arises in my mind. Shall I ask the tree to tell me?
Very good write.
I loved the analogy of the filthy river creating the cricked reflection.
Favorite part:
"Eyes have all the water
Ever flowed under this bridge.
She pouts at her wavy figure,
A disturbed reflection upon filthy river.
Her lips cannot part.
Her body can remember"
I love how this paints a picture in my mind.
Love All, Mejasha
life and trying to earn bread made me an advocate. mad at my own stressful self, turned to writing. poems mainly. but, there are several short stories published in my mother toungue 'bengali'.i live i.. more..