letter to my sister

i love you skylar. please dont do this to yourself

my best friend,

why do you do this to your self?

you know you are a nig reason i keep on living.

when she died, i lost a friend, i couldnt function right.

i eventually thought about suicide.

you helped me, supported me, and in the end changed me.

now you are hurting your self and wanting to die. 

i want to help you like you did for me.

i told you if i loose you i will no longer be.

i love you like a sister, please dont leave me here by myself, i wont be able to handle it. 

your sister and best friend in the whole world, and most of all your biggest supporter,

Kaelyn

Reviews

[Yina]

I can totally feel the pain an sadness you feel. Very sad. She's lucky to have a friend like you:)

[Rose]

Reading this poem i can tell you really care about and love your friend.

[Lorraine]

So much for a sisterly love. Well, first of all, I'd like to comment on the emotions playing throughout this short poem. I'm not really sure if this letter really does reflect in your real life but basing from just how good you managed to portray the emotions, it would seem so. Very good job on that. However, I see some technical errors here like the lack of proper punctuations. And also, it doesn't have that much musicality and creativity to it that most poems do have. Even so, I think this is something worth reading and reviewing you for. Good Luck, then.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Kyla Keltner]

Hey you guys, thanks for the support. And sis, I love you more than anything in this world. I won't take my life anytime soon. I'm just confused about what to do in life. Everythings just a bunch of bullshit when I don't get my way. But anyways, I can't stop reading this poem, and everytime I read it I begin to cry. Thanks and I love you. (:

[Kia-chan!]

So heartbreaking. This poem obviously has a story behind it, and it is so emotional. A lovely peace of art.

[Ethan Paz]

I sense the truth in this letter and the emotion. You convey this very well. I hope Skylar is doing better.

[Holly-Marie]

Beautiful. So full of emotion. a wonderful piece.

[Halkhend]

it is very sad but in all honesty it is good and i know ow hard it is to be around someone who is like that

[E. R. Rawding]

this is really good, very very heartfelt and full of emotion :)

[Preston]

I'm sure it will get better.
Nice poem as well.