Help

Dancing in lifes fire

Taking chances

Making mistakes as I go along

Not learning from them in the process

Knowingly making the same mistakes again

Unable to break the cycle

Getting hurt at every corner

Not knowing what to do

"The right thing"

What is that?

-Satisfying the nees of everybody else?

-Holding nothing that is dear to me?

-Giving up what and who I love?

>Conforming?

Why should I?

Will I learn from my mistakes by doing the right thing?

I don't know.

I know nothing anymore.

Help me?

Save me?

Show me the way?

Lead me properly

Please...

Please...

I've tried

So help me God

I've tried

Unsuccessful everytime.

Is it my fault?

It must be...

"The right thing"

It brought me more pain

Unwanted.

Not needed

 

Help me!

Show me!

Lead me!

Save me!

Please...

Please....

Reviews

[Melissa Kesead]

Wonderful show of ones struggle between doing what is right and doing what may be wrong.

[The Reticent Receptioni..]

passionate and confused, well written. good work. :)

[Ants']

It's Beautiful Carron! a little too close to home for me though. I cannot find the words to describe what i feel when i read this poem, but it seems that even in our different worlds, we have the same uncertainties.
The poems practicality is overwhelming it's almost as if you can read my thoughts. xxx