The Place God Smiles

Silence calms the evening breeze
The flowers all standing tall
The mountains tower above the trees
Making them all look small

A mountain lake reflects the sky
The clouds all wiped away
A place where time itself must sigh
For it's such a beautiful day

Untouched by man, it's plain to see
Corruption no where in sight
The way the land was meant to be
Surrounded by the light

Places like this are a special kind
It's beauty can be seen for miles
No wonder it's so impossible to find
For this is the place God smiles

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

It's places like this where my soul longs to go, when it tires of the hustle and bustle of everyday life. There are many nature poems, but this one is far above most. When I can't get away, I feel reading your poem will help to soothe my soul. Great poem!

[Scarlet Alice]

gives me peace of mind just picturing that place :) really nice.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend.....Whisk

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Amazing!
What captivating description!
sounds like a modern Robart frost
I am growing rather fond of your writings

[Annabelle Lee]

Ahhhh.... What a pleasant thing to revisit. I always did enjoy the liquid like way your pieces flow. Whether read aloud or in the confines of one's mind, a person never has to pick at your work to discover some meaning in it. The rhymes are clever, yet not complicated, and this piece is just the right length.

Nice to read you again.

[Holly Mason]

liked this much gods world is a wonderful place thank you