Feeding the Demons

Feeding the Demons

A Poem by Whiskurz

I must feed these demons that tear at my soul
For they hunger and thirst for my death
An offering of sorts, to appease and console
For they're lusting to covet my breath
The skin on my wrists begin to sigh
As the blade tries to comfort my veins
The death angel waits, he slowly draws nigh
Only a prayer for forgiveness remains
The demons rejoice in lieu of their prize
I can feel their claws holding tight
The darkness replaces the light in my eyes
I move farther away from the light
The floor turning crimson, the demons now drink
They grow drunk on this nectar of life
Death growing closer, he stands at the brink
And licks at the blood on my knife
The demons devour my last will to live
And mercy fades away like a mist
I gave them a gift that no man should give
Though I probably won't even be missed

© 2011 Whiskurz


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Rhythmic. Dark yet extremely profound.

...'The floor turning crimson, the demons now drink
They grow drunk on this nectar of life...'

The demons were stronger than he. What he didn't understand was they selfishly lied to him (of course) since he definitely would be missed.

~ pat


Posted 11 Years Ago


I fell in love with this poem quickly after I read it. It's beautifully dark and has easily become my favorite poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2011
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