You Didn't Notice Me

I hold my breath 'til you walk by 

So you won't see my fear 

My heartbeat screams your name each time 

While hoping you will hear 

My eyes meet yours in silent dance 

Blinded by your fame 

I listen close to every word 

Praying you'll say my name 

My body numb, I cannot move 

Your shadow touches mine 

I long to reach and take your hand 

Please give me just one sign 

My lips in fear, refuse to speak 

A prisoner of my mind 

My words betray me one by one 

They're just too hard to find 

You walk away, my breath relents 

My blinded eyes can see 

My lips scream out your name in vain 

You didn't notice me 

Reviews

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Awesome write, sir :) your expression is clear!

[MusicJunkie]

I know this so well. Every guy I've liked. Good emotion and feeling. Very relatable.

[just is]

Oh boy do I know these feelings so well.
I can feel these emotions tug at the heart.

[pinpen]

I can feel the voice cry out in this, so poetic, i like this. You are talented.