Greenhouses

Greenhouses

A Poem by Lasmuigh

Steel shadows 
etched the route,
Passively draped across an incandescent domain.

Fool's gold beneath a glass roof
murmuring along the cracks,
Glorified by echoes.

Jelly shrinking our periphery
taut, leaning -
shoulders inching toward flight.
Sharp, citrus burst 
to a vulture.

Tetris blocks
Driving honeycomb routine.

© 2013 Lasmuigh


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I really liked your poem. Short enough to keep my interest and yet long enough to enjoy. The last two lines are truly my faorite. Has impact. Thanks for sharing.

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Added on May 5, 2013
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Tags: Frustration, denial, escapism, yearning, city life

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Lasmuigh
Lasmuigh

London, United Kingdom



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A Poem by Lasmuigh