Never Forget

About the love in your life that you never seem to let go.

Summer is here again.  And still you are missing.  I’ve searched everywhere. and still my heart is suggesting: that if I wait for a little while. I might see that familiar smile. Around the corner. I might see your face. Around the corner. That someone I can’t replace. I’ve been waitin’ for far too long. But just for you your worth it. It hasn’t been long enough.

School is here again. And still I am waitin’. I’ve looked everywhere. and still my heart is convincin’ me: that if I wait for a little while. I might see that familiar smile. Around the corner. I might see your face. Around the corner. That someone I can’t replace. I’ve been waintin’ for far too long. But just for you yea h your worth it. It hasn’t been long enough.

Remember the dance that we went too? And you held my hand like that’s what you were put on this earth to do. Yeah I loved you. I loved you then. Yeah remember when? Remember when, you actually, loved me, back??

The rain is here again. And still I am cryin’.  I’ve been everywhere. and still my heart is dyin’: but if for a little while. I might see your little smile. Around the corner. I might see your face. Around the corner. That feelin’ I can’t replace. Around the corner I might see that familiar face. Around that corner. That someone no one can replace.

I’ve been hurtin’ for far too long. But just for you yeah your always worth it.

And it still hasn’t been...  long enough.

Author's Note

I took the picture.

Reviews

[Li Li]

This came off very melodic to me.... almost like a song. The repetition was quite the impacting aspect of this write. The only place I would suggest you take it away is right here:

"Around the corner. I might see your face. Around the corner. That someone I can't replace."

I think it would sound more fitting if you made it:

"Around the corner. I might see your face. That someone I can't replace."

That was the only time where the repetition through me off. You have it giving an emotion through the rest of the piece. As if you are in mourning, and in thought. Your heart is reaching....

That one part just seemed forced....

Other than that.... I think that you have a wonderful grace with words. If you decide to continue, you will only grow. I can't wait to see that growth.

Much love! Bless!
Li

[distefano 401]

i liked the use of repetition in this poem, and i think it's something most girls (including myself) can relate to. you stated it very well.

[closed account]

waiting takes too long,, after a while moving on is faster!! great emotion and hope you see them around the corner!! :-)