Dear God

Dear God

Do you still watch over me

Each day keeping me safe

Always loving me as your child

Remembering not my past sins

Giving me life I don’t deserve

Only to watch me forsake your name

Distancing myself from you

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

This is so real to me. And I feel the words of your poem as my voice crying out to the Lord asking him to help me to get close to him... We are all mere human beings, he doesn't need us but he still chooses us for his pleasure and we as creations keep on questioning and forgetting our creator... A very heartfelt and true write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Pete]

This is excellent. Very creative and honest. It really puts it right out there. Great job.

[J3ssInJupit3r]

I liked this, but I wished it didn't just cut off. Well, that's how it felt anyway, but I really do like how you wrote to him. He likes that too. I am such a strong believer in a higher power, I am not here to tell you to believe though, because if you don't that is your choice. I think everyone needs to find him and get to that point on their own time. I like that you open your heart though. This is nice, I just wished for more.

[Ciara]

Thanks :) Oh and it cut off right there because it is actually an acrostic poem.

[J3ssInJupit3r]

wooow I did not even see that! very clever!