imperfections

You dont see me like i see me 

you see me for all the good

I see me for all the bad 

You can see past the scars

I cant see pass the scars

You see all the happy things

I see all the Bad things

You love me for who i am 

I love you for loving me for me

You love all the imperfections in me 

I love you for all the things that you are 

Your the one who never see me for the bad

Your the one who take the bad and see the good in it

Your the one who fell in love with me for all the things i have done

I am the one who see all the good in you 

I am the one who see all the good and never reminds you of the bad

I am the who fell in love with you for all the things you have done 

We are the ones who fix what is wrong in the other one

We are the ones who dont judge because we both know what we did 

We are the ones who learned from the bad and did good with what we need 

We are the ones who had to fix all the imprefections to find 

that we are the ones who were the one who need each other. 

Reviews

[Blue]

"You dont see me like i see me
you see me for all the good
I see me for all the bad"
-How true. How we perceive ourselves and how others perceive us hardly go in synchrony.

Just minor things: it's "you're" instead of "your" and also the contractions, they should have an apostrophe, like in "don't". Anyway, that's just my 'formal' self kicking in.

[Sarmelendez]

thank you for the help that does seem to work better i always forget what one to use LOL.

[Ashley]

Really great poem and I love how much I can relate to it as well.

[Sarmelendez]

Thank you I am glad that you can relate to this one :)

[Troy Henson]

what a lovely interpretation of what love really is. just wonderful.

Regards
troy

[Sarmelendez]

thank you troy i am glad that you liked it

[shultzfeather]

wonder what 24 will bring

[Sarmelendez]

what do you mean?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a beautiful write hun and so meaningful and romantic.
This poem and that song i cant remember the name, its inspiring me to write a piece on this.
This is what true love is you love eachother and everything about eachother.
As the song does say.... Cause all of me loves all of you.. love your curves and all ur edges all your perfect imperfections.
Beautiful write hun, your love would love this piece I bet :)

[Sarmelendez]

the song is all of me and that is my favorite song. and thank you so much hun he does and he keeps telling me to write more

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you should listen to him smart man :P he knows what hes on about your a great writer :)
Your welcome :)
You, and that song really inspired me I just wrote a very simlar piece and posted it now would you mind checking it out.
Its kind of my boyfriends words what he says to me, but in a poem :)

[A. Amos]

Such a powerful subject! Your writing is so magnificently constructed. 

[Sarmelendez]

thank you so much for the complement. I am glad you enjoyed the reading

[Sami Khalil]

We do see ourselves better than anybody. People don't see the full picture or get all the facts...A splendid poem...:)................

[Sarmelendez]

thank you... and yes that is true.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................