Gone

Mistakes and broken promises

As I've touched my tears dripping down on my face,
Flashbacks are coming back,
Slow and steady yet agonizingly painful.
One by one the people that I love are leaving,
I was okay at first but as time passed,
I don't know anymore.
Give me courage, I said
But I was left alone again.
Broken. In pieces. Hurt.
I cried for help but no one came.
Alone. That's the word.
The word that I've felt every single day.
As I struggled to keep myself up,
I still found myself at the bottom of the never ending well.
Dark, moist, and mossy.
That's what it is, to feel vulnerable.
With no one to hold, touch nor embrace
Help. I'm falling, falling in despair. Save me, I said.
But no one came.

Reviews

[A.Tarek]

I feel this a lot.. I become lost waiting for someone to pull me up but none ever comes..
good short story. It made me sad but it is also refreshing

[LR]

Aww, thank you! This really means a lot. I hope you find your happiness :)

[Margaret]

I've been there too. I eventually learned I had to be my own hero. Well written.

[LR]

That's good, be your own you and don't let anyone step over you. thank you!

[Samuel Dickens]

I think I know the place of which you speak. (Was there many years ago) You've expressed the destitution and unpleasantness very well.

[LR]

Well, yeah. At first I was quite sad about everything but I actually learned how to lessen the pain :)