Icy Dead Stare

When feelings are gone between two people.. there's just no faking it!!!

I bet you could stick a thousand

needles into your eye.

You wouldn't even feel it;

Not a blink.. not a sigh.

 

Do you not feel with your heart

or have the least bit of care?

When I look into your eyes;

All I see is an "Icy Dead Stare".

 

You turn on your computer game system;

shutting the whole world out.

It's like there's no one there and

you fill my whole world with doubt.

 

When you finally come out of your room

and wake up to everyday life.

You'll find everyone is now gone;

including your ex future wife!

 

 

This was written quite some time ago probably about 14 years ago.. 

Reviews

[Poets Soul]

I like it, "including your ex future wife!", was a great last line. Write on. ty PS

[karmic]

Wow i love the part when it said:You'll find everyone is now gone;

including your ex future wife!

Nice feeling inside of your poem. Thanks for sharing.