Swimming Softly...

I sleep amongst whispers of the clouds,

dance along with the rythm of the sun,

talk to the whistling southern winds,

my tears rain down and cleanse the world,

and I walk along the paths of jets,

trailing off into a never ending horizon.

My life is here, among the sky.
 

 

Reviews

[Delilah Dunn]

Oh Lo-

And you say that MY words bring tears to the eye. This piece is so touching to me, and not just because the language is beautiful or because the imagery is so evocative that I feel like I'm floating in the wind, but because their is a beauty in its simplicity that is so powerful that it brings tears. Thank you for the wonderful read...this one goes to the faves.

[Craig]

I like the poem. I was wondering, a bird a spirit or a god.

[MakinItRainRed]

Very beautiful poem...Calling it touching would be an understatement...

[emmajoy]

And you're happy, I hope...

what a beautiful few lines, wistful, peaceful, soothing... ' the whispers of the clouds ' .. yes, they whisper.

Thank you for sharing.