Internaly, My love

I hold you close,

as you slip in and out of concienceness.

As you get colder and colder,

My heart sinks.

I hold you, my love, im my arms,

As you slip away.

Your final words- I love you and i will never stop.

As you take your last breath,

I hold you tighter.

I cry hearder,

You drop dead,

cold,

Lifeless.

In my arms,

Its to late.

You stay with me internaly,

above me.

You love,

and I'll never stop loving you.

Reviews

[BrokenJuliet]

Awww it seemed like a love story.

[Alittlepertubed]

love it very powerful

[deeps]

As you take your last breath,
I hold you tighter.
I cry hearder,
You drop dead,
cold,
Lifeless.
In my arms,
Its to late.

Awesome words, i can feel the powerful emotion protrayed in this write.