Whisper Me A Secret; Wasting The Day Away

Whisper me a secret of true love;
Wasting the day
As we lay in bed bathing in each others presence.

Take me to another planet;
One with only me and you
Where nothing matters.

We�ll teach one another a different kind of curriculum;
Learning as our bodies discover the others.

Pull me closer;
To the point our hearts are paired
And our skin melted against each other.

Take me to places i�ve only dreamed of;
Entering me with pleasure,
Denying the on going torture.

Sweetly become rough with me
Leaving bite marks and bruises;
Forget for a moment i�m breakable.

I�ll leave scratches down you back
And the faintest hint of my being on top of you.

Whisper me a secret of true love;
Wasting the day away.
Drifting off to sleep after a night full of wonder.

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

This was a beautiful poem
I really enjoyed reading this
I am looking forward to reading
more of your work

Awsome job

Orlando M

[MorganLyn]

wow! loved the imagery.
altogether awesome poem!

[forfila]

This is beautiful,
"Take me to places i've only dreamed of;
Entering me with pleasure,
Denying the on going torture"

That was my favorit stanza, really the whole thing fitted well and was very sweet and romantic..

Love
Me

[Dead Angel]

very seductive yet sweet. ever so loving and erotic. very well done! :)