the love I long for

something i think about often, being in love with something that can never be real.

oh creature of the night

and stranger in the dark

is it now so wrong

if i gave my heart

to you

its something supernatural

unlike reality

something more unusual

its lucidity

so instead

i bury my feelings

waste time on dreams

and hope that forever

you won't find the true me

because im already in love

with an idea

with the man in my mind

and its all my hopes and my feelings

they get left behind

because in the day i must travel

onwards and ahead

never looking back

what is beyond the bend

but at night time i wake

when no one is there

i can still feel you spirit 

and i know that you care

and you know that i see you

sitting there unaware

as if your existence

was too real to care

and so instead i sit idle

biding my time

hoping for a real thought

or something to change my mind

so why am i in love

am i going insane

because the man im in love with

exists here in my brain

Author's Note

this is something i wrote really fast, so im curious to hear thoughts on something as basic as just fast free form. cheers! In return for an honest review ill review something of yours.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Pretty lucid, unified and coherent for something written "really fast."

[LukewarmLollipop]

Haha, thank you John! It was an idea that I decided to warm up with, as I have not written in a while. thanks for your comment :)