questions in his mind

questions in his mind

A Poem by Lyrical Love

 
 
I lay here thinking of your questions, and thoughts
how could You not know of what...
would it be like
for me looking at flowers on the streets of New York
at the one of many open store fronts
crowded in enjoyment
sipping my favorite morning java
being carried away in steamy thoughts of you
Waiting, my love for you to find me
openly...
Destined for promise
you Walking with the crowd
but the nearing
of my presence slows your pace
questioning... the energy that turns and moves you with a
feeling-seen in your eyes, knowing that you will soon see my face
only being lead by a dream that holds my spirit
you are lead off course to touch
Running toward the unknown, but welcoming warmth
...solace,
that confuses your mind
like a gust of wind from out of nowhere
she has to be here
you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me
wearing that hat...almost not breathing anymore,
making everything a blur, you
run and put your arms
around my waist without ever seeing my face
and taste my neck with a kiss...I know it is you because
our hearts begin to beat rhythmically,
and like a great crescendo... start to pound like kettle drums
 
One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all
 
questions...
finally answered.
 

© 2008 Lyrical Love



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Amazing!, Beautifully written and expressed in a manner of fine taste,
I should not say this here...lol
My favorite part of a woman is her neck...lol

you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me

This knocked me out of my chair.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful poem.

Art

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I love the way your mind works.

This poem has a theatrical feel and the progressions are crisp.
I can truly appreciate the depth of this piece being that I'm a screenwriter and a musician, the scene is simply spectacular. Each metaphor causes the piece to flourish and the pictures they effortlessly paint allow my senses, intellect, heart and soul to comprehend your thoughts.
I like the way it sustains its strength, it doesn't become weak as it goes on but it matures.
Its as if your style of writing mimics eternity in that its made up of beautiful moments that are endless so there are no repeats just beginnings.
Every time I read something of yours it feels familiar yet very different.
One of my favorite lines... "Only being lead by a dream that holds my spirit."

A lovely write!




Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I have felt and thought so many of those exact words. Recently even.
"One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all

questions...
finally answered."

This stood out to me so strongly. You have an icredible talent, and I look forward to even more of your work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was a very relaxing poem for me.. i like the word play, it is on point.. this is a good peom that alot of others should read.. it moves a comfortable pace and the feel is amazing. it makes me think of that someone i just so happened to find , knowing now that she was the one.. the things u describe are they things i felt .. very good....
you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neckafter gently pushing my hair aside
i like these lines the most... smelling her for the first time was my own utopia..... this poem speaks to me on many levels

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very eloquent write... deep seed with care and passion... your words beam off the page like morning sunlight. AMAZING!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing!, Beautifully written and expressed in a manner of fine taste,
I should not say this here...lol
My favorite part of a woman is her neck...lol

you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me

This knocked me out of my chair.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful poem.

Art

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hey! Now! This is so wonderful, I really liked this so beautiful and touching.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DAMN! This has to be reality. No way this is a fantasy. WOw this is what been missing from theis site and my life. I enjoyed this piece and I think my heart stop for a second or two. Love it it no scale is needed infinity. Thanks for coming to the WC party Lyrical.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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