what we doing

what we doing

A Poem by de_maruf
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How can we fight what can't be seen?

It lies within, as deep as a knife is keen.

Our one true enemy, is not each other,

The enemy is ourselves, each and everyone, simply one after another

© 2012 de_maruf



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nicely written, we are our own enemies

Posted 5 Years Ago


A pointer in the right direction.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really love the first line, it's great!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Yeah......It's struggle of Life.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


de_maruf

5 Years Ago

hmm
...and then there wuz sings *la-dee-dee...one two three...eric the half a bee...* ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


gombeggar

5 Years Ago

just felt some levity wuz needed here...carry on then
Hardest weaknesses to defeat are in our mind and hearts. I like the question and the strong ending in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


de_maruf

5 Years Ago

thnx

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de_maruf
de_maruf

dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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i want to cut my life as my desired time and want to make my time eventful and........................................................................................................................... more..

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