Drug

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I laugh at you
Stupidity-
Etched on your face
I see it-
 How does it feels?
Asking
My head-
Cocked to the side
My drug I feel it
You giving it to me
 I welcome it
 I laugh out loud
 See you tremble
 My words like needles-
 Against your skin
 Clawing it away
Searching for a way
 To your heart
 I bite back a moan
Feeling the drug take it's full effect
I see you watching me-
Watching you
Dread in you eyes
Fear of my reincarnation
Speaking words of doubts
Thinking you kill m
 I smirk
Draining him
Having all of his drug
 I leave-
Knowing I've been filled

Reviews

[Lola]

You have embodied every little thing from guilty pleasure, fear of oblivion, addiction, power, and the ideas of what this means keep flowing in, superb work.

- Lola

[Khal Attero]

I laugh at you
Stupidity-
Etched on your face
I see it-
How does it feels?
Asking
My head-
Cocked to the side
My drug I feel it
You giving it to me
I welcome it
I laugh out loud
See you tremble
My words like needles-
Against your skin
Clawing it away
Searching for a way
To your heart
I bite back a moan
Feeling the drug take it's full effect
I see you watching me-
Watching you
Dread in you eyes
Fear of my reincarnation
Speaking words of doubts
Thinking you kill m
I smirk
Draining him
Having all of his drug
I leave-
Knowing I've been filled

You cease to amaze me every time man, great stuff!

[Coyote Poetry]

"My words like needles-
Against your skin
Clawing it away "
Such strength and power in the statements. You create wild vision with your thoughts and the desire in this poem. A good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

The drug of belittling another person........excellent