A setting sun

A setting sun

A Poem by Mars Bear
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Haiku

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A setting sun cries
Crimson tears fall through grey clouds
Dying embers fade

© 2015 Mars Bear



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What a great haiku! I don't think I've read any of your work before, so I'll surely be paying attention to future pieces by you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mars Bear

2 Years Ago

Thank you. That's very kind.
I also paint and could almost see the setting sun in your write. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mars Bear

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Always hope to paint a picture with words.
Write on..................................................N

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mars Bear

2 Years Ago

Thanks Neville.

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Added on April 6, 2015
Last Updated on April 6, 2015
Tags: Haiku, senryu, short, poem, sun, embers

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Mars Bear
Mars Bear

United Kingdom



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