Haiku Mid-Afternoon Snack

An attempt at a more traditional style of Haiku. (More than just counting syllables.) I think the first one does it the best. The rest may be too sequential.

Haiku Mid-Afternoon Snack

© 2010 Mark Pearce

 

                        A golden window

                        frames the world - a butterfly

                        lights for the artist.

 

                        The wind blows.  Blossoms

                        fall.  Fallen petals create

                        the most fragrant path.

 

                        An oak leaf can be

                        dead red or dead brown - Spring

                        refreshes with green.

 

                        Snow covers the twig.

                        Life is something that cannot

                        be hidden away.

 

                        A radiant glow

                        from the sky - colors reflect

                        back so brilliantly.

 

                        A small toad has lost

                        its way home.  The homeless man

                        has nowhere to go.   

Author's Note

This is my note to reviewers.

Reviews

[Doctor JKC]

Yes, Haiku in feel and more important; intent.
The left side reads so well besides the rest.
A good connection between man and animal,
flora, weather.
I like it when objects get all iced.

p.s. Should you want something specific of
mine to read I would say Hello Daddy and The Accident.