A Box

A Box

A Poem by Matt G
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Ever get a box in the mail and wonder what's inside?

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A box came in the mail today,
I'm not sure what's inside,
A box came in the mail today,
I hope its addressed to me,
A box came in the mail today,
But what's in it the brown packaging hides,
A box came in the mail today,
Oh, I wonder what it could be,
A box came in the mail today,
Oh never mind, its for the guy down the street.

© 2010 Matt G



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I enjoyed the suspense in this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Because of the repetition of "A box came in the mail today,", I like that you had it end with "Oh never mind, its for the guy down the street,". I wasn't sure, at first, if I was going to like this, but the ending was an ironic surprise. Turned out to be a great read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ha, I like the ending. Good flow, ironic ending. I like it. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 14, 2010
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Matt G
Matt G

Red Lion, PA



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