A Box

Ever get a box in the mail and wonder what's inside?

A box came in the mail today,

I'm not sure what's inside,

A box came in the mail today,

I hope its addressed to me,

A box came in the mail today,

But what's in it the brown packaging hides,

A box came in the mail today,

Oh, I wonder what it could be,

A box came in the mail today,

Oh never mind, its for the guy down the street.

Reviews

I enjoyed the suspense in this.

[FocusedAmnesia]

Because of the repetition of "A box came in the mail today,", I like that you had it end with "Oh never mind, its for the guy down the street,". I wasn't sure, at first, if I was going to like this, but the ending was an ironic surprise. Turned out to be a great read.

[SilentDreamer]

Ha, I like the ending. Good flow, ironic ending. I like it. Great job.