An exaggerated thought

An exaggerated thought

A Poem by MIngram
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Just a Draft- I am not this melancholy in reality- A poem to remind me what is important in life. What does it mean to you?

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I wish I could spill myself on a canvas

Be another loathing melodramatic fool

Read love poems and watch cliché’ romantic comedies

Find expression in a plastic bag-dancing in the wind of a busy intersection

I often find myself delving into this world

Compelled by my own compassion

Fully aware of it

Surrounded by it

Counting down the seconds-waiting

For this time-bomb to explode

Slapping me with the stern hand of reality




© 2011 MIngram



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awwwwwwwwwesomeeeeee
I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM, REAL GOOD THOUGHT, I DO NOT KNOW WHETHER THIS IS REALLY CALLED AN "EXAGGERRATED THOUGHT" COS I FEEL IT ALL THE TIME
JUST SO NICELY WRITTEN THANK U FOR SHARING

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well written poem for a working progress. It's straight forward and very emotional. I like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This seemed pretty intense. I liked the line about the plastic bag...this just had a sense of actual reality to it, which is what I believe you meant to do. I really like this...you did a good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


hmm... straight forward and meaningful. Actually, it's pretty amazing. I really like this, great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is an amazing poem.. I was drawn in from beginning to end. well done :) xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


I was drawn to your line about finding expression in a plastic bag dancing in the wind of a busy intersection........something that is very important to me personally. Here as of late I have found it hard to find something joyful to be inspired by, so your poem touched me deeply.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2011
Last Updated on May 25, 2011
Tags: Compassion, Progress, Digression, Canvas, Paint, Fool, Melodramatic, Aware, Reality, Bomb, Time, Stern

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