Why

Why

A Poem by Hopelessly Confused
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Out of my worst nightmare I became stronger.

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Why'd you do it?

You took my heart and tore it in two.

You deceived me and said you loved me.

I never wanted to be hurt.

I feared it.

I thought...

I thought we would be everlasting,

and now that it's finished,

I can never make up my mind.

I cry when I think about how badly you hurt me

and how I miss you.

You caused my worst break down

I tried my best not to show it.

I put on a smile and cried on the inside.

I'll even admit I had to numb myself from the tenderness.

You almost destroyed me.

And I wished I had never met you,

But I'm glad I did.

Because through all the tears, pain, lies

You made me stronger.


© 2009 Hopelessly Confused



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This poem is another good one. A lot of people have been through this. In this poem a lot of people can relate to it. You can feel the pain and the sadness coming from the poem. To put on a mask, and act like you're fine is really hard, but a lot of people do it. Well done =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like this poem a lot!
Really nicely written, the ending was great too!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Beautiful! I like the words you use to describe the pain you feel and the strength you have found because of the pain someone else caused.

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's definitely one of those live and learn deals. Your experiences make you learn from them and in essence become stronger. Nice work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hm, I wasn't expecting the ending. and that's a good thing.
quite honestly, I thought it was going to be one of the usual "you hurt me, I hate you" rants, but you got my respect by taking a step forward and admitting the truth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is another good one. A lot of people have been through this. In this poem a lot of people can relate to it. You can feel the pain and the sadness coming from the poem. To put on a mask, and act like you're fine is really hard, but a lot of people do it. Well done =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it!! I think some word choice could be stronger, but the emotions were clear! Thats what makes a good poem a great poem! :) Good write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to this one. I can feel the pain and suffering coming from the poem and can really tell that this person hurt you bad. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2009
Last Updated on December 29, 2009
Tags: Strength, pain, tears, lies, rebirth

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Hopelessly Confused
Hopelessly Confused

Tallahassee, U.S. Virgin Islands



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