Challenge me

Challenge me,

Not games on heartstrings

Tell me something

To turn my suit of armor inside out

Exposing red flesh and bone,

Explore my mind for years to come

And never tire in your expedition

Until you find me

Cowering in the corner of this world

The core of my shell

Don't save me,

You can't.

I am wild

Not free,

Illuminate this world

In colors I've never seen

Open me,

And see the raw bits of soul

I can't feel

Challenge me.

I want to see it all.

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

ooohh! I love thiss!
it made me feel all the feels
the way you write is alluring
it says "challenge me"
with the tone that says
"I'm challenging you"
the verbiage is so strong
I even like the shape of the poem
beautiful work

[Meraki]

Thank you :)

[The Twin Arenas]

Explore my mind for years to come

And never tire in your expedition



that's so good. What everyone wants, I think. Me anyway. Beautiful lines. All the right words.

[Meraki]

Arigatougozaimasu! That means a lot to me :)