Hunger!!!

Hunger!!!

A Poem by Meshalini
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Feel the pain of hunger.

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Hunger, it's the destiny of every poor people.
If we born as poor, we have to live in hunger for whole life.

Hunger, it's a pain.
If we feel that pain for once, it will leave a huge mark on us.

Hunger, it's the feeling of living in hell.
Often thinking to get out of that life.

Hunger, it's a hope.
Hoping to eat enough food one day.

Hunger, it's a cancer.
It will make us suffer and die slowly without any cure.

© 2016 Meshalini


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Meshalini
This is not my imagination but reality.

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mou
yes you have given a various side of the word "hunger". specially like the line "Hunger, it's a pain.
If we feel that pain for once, it will leave a huge mark on us."
it strike out the thought strongly.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much mou....
There is no lack of truth in what you have written. There is nothing worse than hunger or thirst that finds no relief.

Yet in the industrialized world where food is plentiful (for some) people eat without even being hungry.

If we are fortunate to have food and understand our relationship to it, we would always at least wait till we feel hunger before we eat. This makes our mouths water; which aids in digestion and makes us actually appreciate what we are fortunate enough to have; and maybe conversely to wonder what its like not to be so fortunate.

Love your picture with the raised fist. Strength and Compassion =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Hi lovely lady

Yes you have put it in a nutshell hunger is a horrible thing. Where some feast some starve and there is no sharing. I don't think I have ever really experienced hunger for long periods of time. I don't wish it on any one. I hope as a species we can take our true role upon the earth and not cause suffering but be the care takers of all beings.

Blessings
El

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much sister..
actually people can do something about it
no one should stay hungry
they say if you have enough money build a bigger table not a higher fence
we can do something about it, and i promise ill try my very best to help

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your wonderful words...
I'm happy to know that you will try to end th.. read more
A forgotten problem. Body need food. Brain need food to form properly.
"Hunger, it's a cancer.
It will make us suffer and die slowly without any cure."
Sports, war and terror lead the homeless and hungry forgotten. Thank you Meshalini for sharing the powerful and needed words.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote..
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Yes, hunger is a very bad feeling although it is not that a poor person remains hungry forever. Nicely written. ☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much...

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Added on August 20, 2016
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