Experimenting in College

Lesbian Sex Poem

    Papers scattered below the trestle like block pixels of snow while I ran from one woods to the next, trying to cross before the train came. I rushed off the bridge and below the passing train, and further down until I came to the leaflets of crinkled inkings. They’d been written in a leaky pen, apparently, and the dew made the text bleed out so that the edges of characters had blue or red color seeping from them.
    One was a poem with a picture at the bottom of naked lesbians kissing where I was standing. It read,
“Press, Release:

Soft and gentle experiment,
Yields unprecedented outcome!
Findings revealed below:
Tongues can be taught to read Brail.
Hearts can be taught calligraphy.
Fingers quivering and frail,
Produce new variant of Ecstasy.
Bodies found able to blend souls together.
Heaven to be a kind of sexual weather.
The climax of twenty tons of steel pealing above,
And tornadoes of leaves created in the flow of metal,
Correlate to storms of silent gasps, moans of love,
Excitatory response simulated in the female petal.

More research is needed to better understand this phenomenon."

Author's Note

I live near a very liberal and beautiful college, and I'm happy that this feels like the kind of thing that would happen there.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

I thought "experimenting in college" meant taking a dick load of drugs and f*****g people you don't remember f*****g. I'm down with the lesbiens making out even though most of the lesbiens I've known I wouldn't want to see do anything. (hot chicks typically don't join the armed forces) but I'm an optimist

[Michael G.]

Interesting write and point of view.

[Marie]

This is lovely...I generally find erotica boring because it's repititious, but this is not. The whole analogy works.

I the fourth line from the end, I think you mean "steel" instead of "steal".

[Epipsychologist]

Thank you Marie. I also don't usually like erotica, for the same reasons, but I was feeling a bit capricious.
I always leave one error to make sure my audience is reading carefully (just kidding, btw).
But thank you for your input.