I Wish I could Say Something Special

When someone means so much that there is no words that can aptly describe the depth of passion.

 

I Wish I Could Say Something Special

 

what can I say to you that we haven't discussed before?

It's too self-congratulatory of us to pass between us

more offerings of love and adoration, observations

of your style, art, wit, and beauty;

but I feel I need to pass this moment with you

open to your gaze, so coldly calculatingly

secretive in there, and say something,

somehting significant,

something true,

something real and full of the passion that I feel for you

and you alone,

 as I watch you surf through throngs and crowds,

life and memories. As I watch you become you,

a fraction of your passing touching me

and setting me spinning into the now and the region of your smile.

I really wish it was in me

to say something special.

 

Reviews

[laveen]

amazing..i wish tooo

[deeps]

wonderful write here

[Azaradelle]

Ah, if only it could last forever.
The piece flows like a silk gown cascading down a beautiful body.
You continue to leave me in awe.

Well done.

Yrs.

Azaradelle.

[Leah T]

this is beautiful, sounds great read aloud, flows like water over rocks. the content is so tender and sweet, and it expresses something i feel all the time. the reason i don't write love poems is this poem. well done.

[Rain]

Send this to the one your heart speaks of, and you will find you said much, and said it beautifully. Rain..

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiment and so true how difficult it is to find the words to express how we feel sometimes - especially when it comes to love. Great expression. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Kara Emily Krantz]

wow i loved this!!!!!! couple typos in there, that tripped me up a little, but those are easily fixed lol

"something significant,
something true,
something real and full of the passion that I feel for you"

that hidden rhyme within the poem worked wonders. it played so well within the piece.

i really loved this. the sentiment is so honest, and so.. profound at the same time. great write!