Shooting stars

Shooting stars

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

feeling these tears....

"

These Wondering eyes,

that focus on the pain.

With the time that flies,

yet it seems I'm still falling.

 

A heart torn from this feeling.

Your arms wrap around me,

But I still feel cold.

Livining in this second,

That I wonder why...

 

Watching the tears of the sun run,

that I ride on shooting stars.

© 2009 Michael Lopez


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This is short but meaningful ...Your front page says you're not a writer but your writing is very good and very deep.

Great job!

...Nae-Nae

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on June 18, 2009
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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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