Where did I go wrong?

Just a poem I had wrote at one time or another.

 

They were in no way excuses, just reasons.

No, I am not sorry for what I did.

Are you sorry for what you did?

I would not have done it if I did not have a reason.

Your unclear assumptions caught me off guard.

Just because I did it does not mean I wanted to.

You think you won but what is there to win?

We will know when you let your guard down.

You will know how it feels.

I will understand better.

Then we will remember what our reason is for fighting.

Being able to know what I did wrong, what you said wrong.

Being able to know there are no beginnings and with that no end.

Letting our walls down, I want to know our positions in life.

Where do you stand?

Do you stand next to me?

If not, where did you go?

Maybe I did not do this; you did this instead.

If I did not do something wrong, I said something that struck you wrong.

Now you are gone.

Let us stop here; let us not move any farther.

If I do not know, I expect you to tell me.

Where did I go wrong?

Author's Note

Feel free to use your freedom of expression~ =^-^=

Reviews

[MadasonBlue]

Wow. Everything anyone ever misunderstood about somebody else, all wrapped up into an eloquent poem. Sweet.
Great job.

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reat write...I like it alot its well writen

[Kira Leon]

I liked it. ^o^ It shows alot about how people can misunderstand each other and the effects it can cause! I'm not much of a poet myself, but I enjoy reading others work, yours is very nice. ^o^

[Alex]

Just... nice. I love the way that it's so freely written. I think if you had tried to structure it too much it would have really taken away from the poem, I love the free verse style. Well done.

Nice display picture, by the way. Welcome to WC. ^_^

[Jay]

Nicely written. The poem shows how people may misunderstand one another and how lack of communication can cause the breakup of an otherwise inseparable couple (friends and/or lovers). Again, nicely written.