The ring

The ring

A Poem by MikeV
"

This is all true. I wrote it in rhyme form

"
My granny sat silent, observing my hands
She finally smiled at me and asked
"Where did you get that ring?"
I looked down,"oh this thing?"
I then started telling her the special meanings of all my jewelry
Then she smiled and handed me the most beautiful ring id ever seen
She told me it was my gramps wedding ring from her
As tears filled our eyes, she said, "now I was married to her"
I smiled as my heart skipped a beat or two
I looked at her and said,"granny, I do"



© 2013 MikeV



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Ahhhh...so sweet Mike...loved it...Rose:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


So emotive and touching too...Splendid ...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very touching piece...thanks for sharing.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago



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MikeV
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