Hmm...I like it.
What I don't like: porcelain boulders, 4th stanza
What I like: Waterfall fabrics, everything other than what I said I didn't like.
I think I'm confused. You make this bathroom seem like, normal, but maybe above normal. I'm thinking this because you say silver, curlers, I don't know, just get a sense of really nice bathroom. But then you throw in old towels. I'm picturing nice, new towels in this bathroom. Oh well, It's still good.
S.k.
Interesting, you build up a complicated picture. Love the fourth stanza, really builds up the tension. Don't like the exclamation marks at the end though.
Hmm...I like it.
What I don't like: porcelain boulders, 4th stanza
What I like: Waterfall fabrics, everything other than what I said I didn't like.
I think I'm confused. You make this bathroom seem like, normal, but maybe above normal. I'm thinking this because you say silver, curlers, I don't know, just get a sense of really nice bathroom. But then you throw in old towels. I'm picturing nice, new towels in this bathroom. Oh well, It's still good.
S.k.
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