Hatred

Loathing

Tears dried,
But soul cried.
Crushing defeat,
Faced the heart beat.

Lost the ephemeral delight,
In this soul-murdering fight.
In sorrow, life did delve,
No one told me how to...
Overcome this hatred for self.

Reviews

[Raghib]

Those voices in my head
Tell me I am better off dead.
But I have a will to stay
To experience things, and even pain.........
I will like to thank you. You just gave me an idea for a new poem.
This shows how much relatable you write. A good read Mikku

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot. I actually think that sometimes.."i am better off dead"

[Raghib]

Dont give in to that thought. Trust me it hurts everyone else

[Mikku]

That's what keeps me going..

[Najam Us Saher]

Also, no one tells how good you really are. I like how you manage to rhyme always.

[Mikku]

Thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.