Goodnight Joshua

This one is about my boyfriend going into the USAF (united states air force).

Goodnight Darling

Goodnight, Goodnight

Can you feel my kiss on your cheek?

Oh hold me

extra tightly

For you'll be gone soon.

Don't you dare forget me

I'll still be here

I swear

I'll swear up and down

that I won't leave this town

Until we're both where we belong

In each other's arms

Please don't be scared for me,

I'll be just fine

as long as you're still mine

Being alone will be the hardest part

because I loved you from the start

Don't you wish we could crawl into this bed,

and never leave?

So every single night,

I could rest my head on your sleeve

Oh darling wouldn't it be sweet,

to not feel a thing, 

but each other's heart beats?

Author's Note

The last 3 lines are my favorite :) No hate please!

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

These are MY favorite lines!!
"Don't you dare forget me
I'll still be here
I swear
I'll swear up and down
that I won't leave this town
Until we're both where we belong"

Was there a better way to say "I Love You"? I don't think so. That was heartwarming and you are gorgeous.... beautifully done!!

For the USAF crews: FIGMO WRT ....a heart at home that waits!! Have an awesome holidays.... xoxo -Mark

[MissJenaBlair]

Thanks Mark! And you're right, the best way to show someone you love them, is to be there for them, and have faith in them. I'm glad you liked it :)

[Inda]

Really sweet, you have the voice of a young woman really going through this, don't know how personal this is, but it rings true and that's what you want to accomplish, good job!

[MissJenaBlair]

Thank you very much! and yes, it's very personal. I wrote this about my boyfriend who is joining the air force and leaving for basic training this summer.

[RachelReaper]

no hate needed! This poem was very sweet and heartfelt.

[MissJenaBlair]

Thank you! That means a lot coming from a talented writer!

[RachelReaper]

thank you.

[CreativeStroke]

The last 3 lines were also my favorite. You have quite a beautiful writing style and this piece certainly showcases that ability.

"ss long as you're still mine" I think you meant to put 'as' here. :)

[MissJenaBlair]

I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[CreativeStroke]

I really did. You have a beautiful style of writing... a fresh style.

[Shawna]

Love this, it is so sincere and heartfelt. Great poem!

[MissJenaBlair]

Thank you so so much :)