This Chemical Wedding

This chemical wedding

between death and fate herself

with all immortals attending

raising a drink to their health

the bride dressed in the darkest dreams

of those who ponder at night

her veil weaved, of choices made

her eyes empty pools of light

the groom dressed in all his splendour

his jacket made of dying men's wishes

with his suit made of suicide

and hemmed with lover's last kisses

the rings they exchange are made of pure belief

one engraved with laughter, one with tears

and the confetti and petals that are tossed

are made of velvet fears

and the vows that are recited

touches all in their ethereal heart

with whispered sincerity

Till man do us part!

Author's Note

I know the grammar is lacking but when I get in the writing mood I don't really pay attention to comma placement etc. Here's some extra comma's for you to place where ever you want ,,,,,,,,,, :)

Reviews

[Bryan Micheni]

This is honestly one of the best pieces i have ever read...