Shadows Fall

Shadows Fall

A Poem by MomzillaNC

Places of loss and time long gone
Treading the paths of mourning
Of dreaming ended in nevermore
All hope at an end and buried deep
Left behind by those who lived on
Now speaking to seekers of melancholy
Strangers long laid to eternal rest
Now left to be revered by strangers
Shadows fall on forgotten memories


Photo taken by D. Denise Dianaty, 
17 March 2017
This image inspired the poem

© 2018 MomzillaNC


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A really beautiful piece. I am always fascinated and reverent in graveyards, feeling like I am treading on someone else's memories ... I believe you have captured that feeling well. Lovely presentation too, as always

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thank you. I feel precisely the same way in graveyards.
So heartbreaking, touching and tragic. Death comes to us all. And when all gone strangers see next where you lie.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Yeah, there’s a deep melancholy in visiting forgotten graves.
This is so heartfelt and heartbreaking. I love your work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Wow, the sorrow really hits you hard reading this. This sounds like a child that lost their innocent days too early due to a tragedy.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thanks. I can see how it might feel like that. It’s actually about the way old graveyards can make.. read more
I enjoyed reading your artistic piece as usual. Is it viewed from the point of view of that child's shadows? I would love to know, if I got the meaning right.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thank you. And, yes, the child whose shadow falls across the grave gave me the perspective for this .. read more

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