THE BLUE EYES MAN

Trinidad misses you

Good morning,

it's a beautiful day in Trinidad.

Sunny and warm,

fresh breeze and a canopy of light clouds,

I am under- grey, blue and white they are.

Hmm, clouds- the colour of your ocean eyes

Where earth meet skies,

Lovely it is .

These you miss-

Birds complain to hear your voice ,

The bees stores you honey- in house .

Be filled with the Spirit Of God

Reviews

[Woody]

sweet little poem. lovely descriptions. I like this.
now, I hate to be the one who points out mistakes but we all here want to improve, right? that's the point of reviewing.
I suggest: the blue-eyed man
earth meetS skies
eyebrows = one word
did you mean the bees store (without the S?)
awaitS
why the dash between her and only?

apart from that, I love this poem.

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you woody for corrections. I will see to it later, Right now i am too lazy to correct mistakes. Lately I stall in my writing as well . But I wanted to indulge my self and stop by your write.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Hmm, clouds- the colour of your ocean eyes
Where earth meet skies,
Lovely it is ."
I like the description in the poem. The above lines were strong, made me wish to read more. The poem felt like a story. I needed to know the who, why, when, where and how. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Rose of many colours]

The who- Is someone I met and fell in love with, he had to leave and go to another country.he has blue eyes. And he loves This country with a passion. I describe Trinidad for him. in this piece. He has an aura about him that he fits in with nature so well.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the tale. Old memories make the best poetry because they are true.

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you great writer..

[Sami Khalil]

The call of this exotic island with its talented poet where earth meets the sky and where magic can't belie its beauty. Excellent...:)..........

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks Sami for these words of Encouragement. it makes me want to write without stopping

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)..............