You Spend an entire day

You spend an entire day
worried.
Worried because you see it coming,
the change in the wind,
the flight of the bird.

You Spend an entire day,
the sure thing.
Why, why not?
Odds of numbers,
Law of probability.

You Spend an entire day,
knowing.
It is so clear a bird could fly into it,
the sky is shining through it.
We all of eyes.

You Spend an entire day,
and luck sparkles.
And he brought the smile of your woman,
the shine of her eyes.
Love of her heart.
She is the entire day,
the sun light and moon of night.

You Spend an entire day
feeling her support.
Expressing the love,
making her smile.

No matter how you spend your day,
No matter how far apart,
You feel that love.

Thats how you Spend an entire day.

Reviews

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This was beautiful... Touched a spot in my heart..
It's nice to see this side of your writing..

[sedona._.arizona]

Beautifully written. I hope I can get this good. I love the way everything is worded and I thought it was very beautiful.

[Eve]

Who are you and what have you done with MoriartyMesa! just kidding,lol, every once in a while you pull out something phenominally beautiful and extraordinarily written, sentimental poem, loved it XD

[Deandra Dawn]

This is very sweet. Beautifully done.

[Ruth]

And love lingers, whether present or not doesn't it!?
Outstanding poem!
A caress where numbess can dance....a tiptoe of shimmering sunbeam.....love it!
xx

[Joiedevivre]

Nice! Loving the change in the mood especially given the female influence. Love can wipe out even the worst of premonitions. Great stuff!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Lovers have come and gone, the thoughts that are left are reminiscent of what people share within that time, well done, great read, flows easily and is very un-rushed.

[darkness*star1985]

very special and very sweet, good write.

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow
Really enjoyed this!
An amazing love entendre :)