You.

You.

A Poem by Ally Monique
"

I try to write about other things besides you.

"
And I'll never admit-
how often your name
aches to dance
off my tender lips.


© 2014 Ally Monique



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such sweet metaphor here....short and impactful write.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Jacob!
Oh, this is good...
I find these little short a sweet poems to be the most thought invoking.
Good one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

4 Years Ago

thanks ance! :) I find that Haiku's often hold the most depth
Matching Socks

4 Years Ago

I agree, I have a few peppered through my pages.
: ) Short a sweet
Oh so tender, Oh so fragile, Oh so sweet with emotion so open and transparent . Is the renunciation of rejection that makes this lines of such wonderfull complexion.

Thankyou Ally

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Ally Monique

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Uncertainty can make the lips tremble. Everything comes together in the end :)
...how lovely this is, in its simplicity and brevity!


My best,
Kelly

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) this was my first try at a haiku!

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